Screengates will sculpt your story into a compelling cinematic concept, then develop this concept into a captivating screenplay tailored to your budget. We'll then find a production company for your film.... We'll present the screenplay along with production specs to the producers you choose, then help you engage the right one.... Our business model is simple: first develop a concept and script, then source the right production company.Now, I don't know how much Screengates' clients are accustomed to paying for all that high-end, fancy-sounding "developing" and "tailoring" and "sourcing," but I have news for anyone who intends to use Screengates to commission a translation:
that "All of our script translators are professional screenwriters
translating into their mother tongues").
Recently, Jonathan Gainer of Screengates posted an announcement on ProZ.com seeking an IT>EN translator for a "dramatic screenplay." In the exchange of emails that followed, he took pains to specify that
I’m expecting a very elegant translation. By elegant I mean that the translation should be completely free of grammatical, spelling and formatting errors, and feature dialogs which rhetorically re-create the characters in English. The characters should ‘feel’ authentic, and use language that is a near equivalent, both rhythmically and colloquially, to their speech in the original.... I’ve attached a paragraph expressing my thoughts on dramatic translation.... If we work together, it is quite important that you be extremely careful in your final checking of the screenplay. You work will not be going to an editor, so it has to be error-free. If working according to these specifications might be problematic, please refrain from taking the job. This may sound rather severe, but I like to be very upfront about expectations in new relationships so that there are no misunderstandings.The message edges right up on presumptuousness, but it's still within the limits of acceptability. Besides, a client who recognizes quality and knows precisely what he wants is a very good thing. Naturally, when the requirements are as stringent as that and when the product must be ultra-perfect, the translator can rest easy, right? He won't need to remind the client that prime quality commands prime rates, right?
And especially not when (as Gainer revealed) the screenplay in question is based on a novel by one of Italy's best known post-war writers and critics--one known for his dense and demanding prose, right?
Wrong, wrong, and wrong.
Screengates' offer for 100 pages? €1000.
Actually, "offer" is a misleading word, as it always is in these cases. Screengates' take-it-or-leave-it demand was that the translator perform his services for €1000. And deliver within 10 days (weekends included). Oh, and submit an unpaid test first.
Let's do a little easy math. If "pages" means typescript pages, we can calculate a price of about €0.04/word, but that's assuming a "normal," single-spaced page of Italian in 12-point type. Obviously, you can get more than 850 words on a page if you reduce the font by just one point and change to single-spacing.
Or perhaps "page" means cartella, which is a measure widely used in Italy (but probably not in very many other places). A cartella is usually of 1500 or of 2000 characters, with spaces included. Ten euros for a cartella of 1500 is insulting; €10 for a cartella of 2000 is fightin' words.
But here's the real point (and evidently this mantra needs to be repeated at least daily): Clients do not set prices or working conditions for freelancers. They make requests, which the translator may do his or her best to accommodate (assuming the requests are reasonable and/or humanly possible). It is, moreover, at least polite to ask your potential translator how busy he is in the near future, rather than assume he's just sitting around waiting for your job and would be delighted to block out weekends and evenings to get it done on your schedule.
(Or, to put it another way: If you haven't left enough time for the translation to be done properly, remind me again how that becomes my problem?)
This increasingly common approach to finding a translation professional is a distortion of supply-demand in the marketplace. More than that, it's just plain rude.
To get these points across, I was thinking of writing a captivating screenplay about translation, full of compelling cinematic concepts. I wonder if Screengates would represent me....